Beautiful People: Greetings to Patience

I’m still editing – and trying to balance the two academic and creative meanings of ‘revision’ – so I have no fully-formed character to present for you. Instead, I’m going to have a new-new character for this month’s great questions of the Beautiful People tag (hosted by Cait and Sky). Patience (surname-not-yet-created) is the MC and a maid in one of the steampunk stories I want to write and of which I have a couple of scenes.

  1. What is their secret desire?

Although she outwardly strives for adventure and wouldn’t say no to the job of travelling into the atmosphere, Patience is actually quite shy and very afeared towards the monster aboard The Mallard cosmic train. Her secret desire is probably a simple one: to have a family and not be a servant her entire life, even if the alternative is ‘serving’ as a mother (!). Thus, it’s natural that she forms a bond with similar-minded family-orientated Milo so quickly. It’s not insta-love (in which I don’t believe), but I have seen this sort of bond form in real life, so I know it is possible to transfer to characters.

  1. What is the best and brightest moment they experience during the story?

Probably kissing Milo. I mean, getting to travel to space is awesome and all, but to meet a fellow mind and to go through mystery with him is something that Patience will never experience in her life again. Hair flowing against the backdrop of stars…

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Messier 5 stars, as seen through the Hubble telescope. Wikipedia commons


  1. What are the emotional places your characters are afraid to go to?

As an orphaned only-child, Patience can be quite shielded at times. Not one of those dramatic leading ladies who struggles to bond because her parents were unfair or abusive or, conversely, over-soft, but nevertheless someone who doesn’t share her mind so much when it comes to serious matters. Her parents were not overly-strict or overly-caring, so she appears to not miss them so much. I think she could open her heart to her childhood, though – not be afraid to admit that she wasn’t a working girl her entire life.

  1. Is there a place/city/room where they will never go?

Patience will probably never get to travel. At least: to the other side of Earth. Even when her contract with The Mallard ends, she will probably go back into service (unless Queen Victoria enlists another such contraption) and thus will be confined to England. Patience is not a lady’s maid – hence why she was dispensable yet reliable – so she doesn’t get to travel to other Earth countries with her mistress. I suppose that answers the question, even though I haven’t really thought out much of Patience’s ‘backstory’ yet.

  1. If they were permanently leaving town, what would they easily throw out? What would they refuse to part with?

She easily throws out her outfits and miscellaneous bits and bobs that she held on to when she worked in her household. These little items – like an acorn seed her first sweetheart gave her – keep her sane on nights when her family are demanding, but when Patience realises that she has a chance to move into a new field of work as a server on The Mallard she doesn’t see the need for trinkets of nature and fabric. Will she reject this move? That’s a question I’ll be asking myself.

Patience has a necklace that belonged to her mother, a small silver cross. She never takes it off, even though it gets broken over the course of the novella. She’d definitely refuse to part with it, due to sentimental value, and her parents’ once-religiosity. It has past and a kind of fortune.

Sweet Dreams

  1. What do they want (consciously and tangibly)?

Patience would rather like to spend some time at the seaside, perhaps trying fish delicacies and lending her hand at gutting the fish. She doesn’t want a fisherwoman’s life over being a maid to a small household, but she’d like to try something different for a while, as she’s getting a little bored of routine and safety. Figures.

  1. On the other hand: what do they need (on the emotional, subconscious level)?

Patience could probably do with some modest restraint. She’s not one of the sharper-tongued MCs I’ve written, but she still has an outspoken streak, even going so far as to question why her mistress sold a ring to pay for Patience to be one of the servers travelling to space.

  1. If they could change one thing about themselves, what would it be?

She doesn’t have the best self-confidence. I know Patience would like her mystery-solving skills to be better based on logic, when she doesn’t realise that she’s actually good at inference mystery and, well, snooping and silent wandering.

Nor, for that matter, does she have the best sense of humour. She’s a serious young woman– though, luckily, not to the point of being the straight man whom I wouldn’t be able to write.

  1. What is the most humiliating event of their life?

Being a servant, she has experience many humiliating moments. Her employers – well, her mistress – are rather demeaning, as was the way for servants. There were many life lessons she learnt about working in a busy household as she grew up, many slip-ups, literal and figurative.

  1. What things do they turn to when they need a bit of hope?

Back on Earth, Patience was friends with a younger maid, Marie, who, although lovely, was the lowest in the social hierarchy, and, as such, a bit of a drip. In orbit, however, Patience cannot turn to her absent friend, and she trusts no one but Milo onboard the lethal vessel. On the other hand, she is known to the driver for her love of almond cake and gingerbread pudding from the dining car.

Look, Cait, food for you! Hope you all enjoyed my Beautiful People post for March. I certainly learnt a lot about the backstory and past of my newest MC. Readers, don’t forget to check out the other writers who have participated in this month’s Beautiful People posting.

8 thoughts on “Beautiful People: Greetings to Patience

  1. Patience sounds like a really interesting character! I find it fascinating that on the one hand, she’s driven to have a different kind of servitude as a mother, but comes from a family from which she distances herself (at least in appearances). I also like that she and Milo won’t be having any insta-love, because that’s just getting a little too old for my tastes. 🙂 Patience sounds like a great character, and I hope you have an awesome time continuing to develop her story!

    By the way, thanks for stopping by at my Beautiful People post! 🙂

    Sorry. Yes. YOUR POST. *focuses* ohhh, I really like the sound of Patience! She sounds really well developed too. Balancing out-spoken and vulnerability is always hard, imo. HUMOUR IS THE BEST THOUGH. I love reading and writing humour. xD Yay, thanks so much for linking up with us!! I enjoyed reading this. 🙂


      Yay, so many people have said they like the sound of her, which is great and encouraging, though I’m finding her voice a little young as I’m writing at the moment. It’s so hard to write 20-somethings, because they have that level of immaturity that’s not quite as bad as teens, yet they’re not ‘mature’ enough to write them maturely. If that made any sense.
      Humour is so difficult for me write though. IRL, I’m like “No, I don’t tell jokes. Don’t make me do ittt!”

      Thanks for commenting, Cait! I enjoy these Beautiful People posts a lot.

  3. Hah – I like that she wants to do something as completely different as fish-gutting! Also – almond cake and gingerbread. Yum 🙂

    1. Hehe, thanks. I’ve been trying to flesh out my characters more, so I wanted something in the era, but something different. 😛
      Thanks for commenting!

  4. I love your names! 🙂 Patience is so unique, and I’ve always loved the name Milo. Also, traveling in space is awesome. I want to read your book, like right now.

    1. Hehe, I’ve actually been writing quite a lot of it recently, though it’s no way near readability level yet 😛
      Thanks, Kate, and for commenting! I do like the name Patience, but I just wanted some simple, Victorian common names. Yes, travelling in space!

  5. If the story is anything like this character, it’ll be very well thought-out and fun! Once it’s hit readability, I’d love to see it! (and I too like the names. Especially Milo’s, who I now need to know about! 😛 ) ~Andrea

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